2015年四川自贡中考英语作文范文( 六 )


4) 感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等 。
5) 动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等 。
上下文要连贯 。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅 。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:
1) 表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or
2) 表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however
3) 表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that
4) 表示空间关系的过渡词:near , far , in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside
5) 表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as
6) 表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though
7) 表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again
8) 表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result
9) 表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually
10) 表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important
11) 表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to,
12) 表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as
13) 表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking
4. 不会表达,另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分 。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话: 错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简 。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯 。
迂回而行
当汉语词义不会用英语表达时,可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义 。扩展思路,然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替 。这样可有异曲同工之妙 。
小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达 。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等 。
借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现 。因为刚刚做过题,记忆犹新,那么就可信手拈来,为我所用 。