暑假英语日记写法怎么样？

A new term began. Students all returned to school met again. They were talking about what they had done in the holidays. I was happier. I couldnt wait to tell my story. Now its my turn. I told them I got a job in a restaurant. I worked as a waitress.
They didnt believe at first.
Yes, its true. I said, I really had a hard time at the beginning. But several days later, I could do a good job. I earned six hundred yuan this holiday. They all looked at me with their mouths open.
A TRIP TO the COUNTRY
One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country.She bade me take good care of him.
While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently.We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees.The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful).
When we felt tired, we returned home.We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door.
MY BIRTHDAY
Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my clamates sent me presents.
Mother prepared a tea party for me.I invited all of them to come and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six.There were cold drinks and
refreshments.We ate, talked and laughed.We felt that we were the happiest men in the world.Time paed quickly.In a twinkling, the clock on the wall struck nine.We could not but say “Good-bye” to one another.
MY DAILY LIFE
Though my daily life is extremely monotonous, I try hard to adapt myself to it.Why? Because I intend to be a good student.I wish to render service to my country.
I get up at six o’clock every day.After I wash my face and brush my teeth, I begin to review my leons.I go to school at seven o’clock.
After school is over, I return home.We usually have supper at seven
o’clock.then I begin to do my homework.I want to finish it before I go to bed.
My hobby
Do you have any hobbies? If not ,what do you do in the holidays ? I have many hobbies .On weekdays ,when I study in school ,I play with my
clamates .Sometimes I play volleyball with them,sometimes I play football with them .I think playing football is very interesting and exciting .But when I get home ,I like listening to music alone .Also I like reading story books.When I am not happy about something ,I usually draw some pictures though I am not good at drawing .On weekends ,there is no cla ,I like shopping with my friends and my parents .Hobbies can make someone happy ,so I like
them .And I have many hobbies.Do you agree with me?
.My friend
I have a good friend.She is a pretty girl.She lives in Jiujiang.She is a middle school student.She has big eyes, a small mouth, a small nose and a round face.She is tall and thin.She likes watching TV and playing the basketball.On the weekend, she always plays basketball with her friends in the afternoon and watches TV in the evening.She is a good student.She is good at English.She likes speaking in English.She always reports news in English in her school.She says we are good friends.We often send e-mails to each other everyday.I like her very much.