元旦五年级英语作文格式怎么样？( 三 )

【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。my favourite food
do you know what this is? gue! its colour is yellow.it’s long and thin.it looks like a small boat and crescent.oh, it is a banana.do you know what that is? gue again! its colour is orange.it’s round.it looks like a small ball and a small lantern.oh, it is an orange.i like then a lot.i like ice-creams.i like to chew gum.chocolates and candies are yummy.i like them very much. how about you? what’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】my favourite food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。i can help do housework
i am a girl.my name is li ling.i’m in cla three, grade five.i’mhelpful at home.i can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor.after meals, i can help my mother do the dishes.on sunday, i can wash the clothes.what about you? are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。in the kitchen
this is the kitchen of my family.it’s big and nice.look! my
mother is cooking in it.this is a microwave and that is a stove.there is a big table here.there are many things on it.what are these? they look yummy! oh, they’re strawberries.and what are those? they are grapes.
【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
my village
my village is very beautiful.there are many houses in the village.near the village, there is a forest.a small river is in front of the village.the water in it is very clean.we can see some fish in the river.near the river, you can see a mountain.some flowers and gra are on the mountain.i like my village.welcome to my village!
【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。my house