青春作文800字_初中初一作文如何写?( 七 )


(1)位于安徽南部 , 是中国著名的旅游胜地 。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光 。
(2)乘汽车去大约要花3个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去 。
(3)登山便可领略其云海、奇松、怪石等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出 。
要求:(1)字数:80词左右 。
(2)请不要逐字翻译 。
参考范文
The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the south of Anhui.Every year numbers of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It\\'s not far from here.It takes you about three hours to get there by bus.You can also go there by train or by plane.While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It\\'s really a nice place to visit.
简评
文章一开始 , 作者先写了黄山是著名游览胜地 , 然后点出了其位置;接着写了去黄山的路线 , 用多少时间;最后写了黄山的景观 。整篇文章井井有条 , 详尽而不杂乱 。
三、学生习作
1.根据下面汉语提示 , 以“My schoolbag”为题 , 用英语写一篇50~60词的短文 。要求内容完整 , 语言规范 。
(1)书包的形状、颜色、制作材料;
(2)书包的功能和用途;
(3)你对书包的感情;
(4)下列单词供选用:rectangular长方形的;cloth布;leather皮革 。
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2.在英语角晚会上你准备用英语简单介绍中国 , 要求包括以下内容:
(1)中国是世界上最大的国家之一 , 有悠久历史;
(2)有13亿人口 , 中国人民勤劳友好;
(3)中国有许多大江 , 高山;
(4)长城举世闻名(famous);
(5)中国是发展中国家 , 在党的领导(leadership)下 , 我们正在使国家更富强 。词数:60-80
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