写英文求职信的要点如何写?( 六 )


Replyingtoyouradvertisement……Answeringyouradvertisement……Believingthatthereisanopportunity……Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourcompany……Havingreadyourad……
再比较下列三句 。(a)句较差,经过修改后(b)句显得较恰当 。
1.(a)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsalesmanager……
 (b)InapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanagerIoffermyqualifications,whichIbelievewillmeetyourexactingrequirements.2.(a)Ibelieveafterreadingyouradvertisementinthismorning‘sJournalthatyouhavejusttheopportunityIamlookingfor.
 (b)youradvertisementinthismorning‘sJournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptsmetoofferyoumyqualificationsforthisposition
3.(a)HavingreadyouradvertisementintheNewYorkTimesforanaccountant,Ithoughtyoumightbeinterestedinmyapplication.
 (b)Inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofacompetentperson,withthoroughtraininginthefieldofcostaccounting.pleaseconsidermeanapplicantfortheposition.HerearemyreasonsforbelievingIamqualifiedforthiswork.
求职的人不得不提到希望待遇时,可用类似的句子:
1.Ihesitatetostateadefinitesalary,but,aslongasyouhaverequestedmeto,Ishouldconsider6,500amonthsatisfactory.我对待遇总是迟迟无法定个确切数目,但既然您要我说明,我认为月薪六千五百元就满意了 。
2.AlthoughitisdifficultformetosaywhatcompensationIshoulddeserve,Ishouldconsider-amonthafairinitialsalary.虽然我很难说待遇应该是多少,我以为起薪每月--很合理 。
3.Ifeelitispresumptuousofmetostatewhatmysalaryshouldbe.Myfirstconsiderationistosatisfyyoucompletely.However,whileIamservingmyapprenticeship,Ishouldconsider-amonthsatisfactorycompensation.余不敢冒昧说出起薪多少 。最初余仅想要如何工作得好,使您满意 。在学徒(试用)期间,月薪--即可 。
提到待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用 。
1.Asforsalary,Idonotknowwhattosay.Would$4,500amonthbetoomuch?至于起薪,我不知怎么说,月薪四千五百元会不会太多?
2.DoyouthinkIshouldbeaskingtoomuchifIsaid5000dollarsamonth?若要求月薪五千元,会不会太高?
3.YouknowwhatmyservicesareworthbetterthanIdo.AllIwantisalivingwage.对敝人工作的价值您比我更清楚 。我仅想够糊口即可 。
应征函或自荐函的结尾用语,试比较下列各句:
1.(a)软弱、羞怯的:IfyouthinkIcanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,Ishallbegladtotalkwithyou.读完此信后倘您认为敝人可补缺,敝人愿和您一谈 。
【写英文求职信的要点如何写?】 (b)改写后(较佳):Ifmyapplicationhasconvincedyouofmyabilitytosatisfyyou,Ishouldwelcometheopportunitytotalkwithyou,sothatyoumayjudgemypersonalqualificationsfurther.2.(a)怀疑,不妥、不安全的:Ifyou‘reinterested,letmeknowimmediately,asI‘msureandinterviewwillconvinceyouI‘m