大学生英文自荐信格式怎么样？

Dear manager,
Thank you for taking time for me to introduce myself.My name is Jun Deng, a senior student in Chengdu University in China at present, and i will get my bachelor\\'s degree in July, 2011.Being an English major, i have studied a lot in the university for 4 years.Not only knowing western life culture, but also literature.During my stay in the university, i did a very good job.I was one of the chief leaders in our cla for two years.And because of my "excellent service" for others, i got a reward for "excellent student leader", which is a convincing return for my responsibility.On the other hand, due to my diligence, i got national scholarship for twice.
As for my working experience, i\\'d like to say, i did several kinds of different jobs.In the year of 2010, i participated in the "Work and Travel" program, i worked in
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania.I was working for a family company named "Simon\\'s Food Conceion" for 4 months and a half.Since our job was on the wheel, I did diverse jobs like making fast food, selling, cleaning and moving stuffs from one place to another.And at last i learned more about American food culture and my English communicating skills improved.In 2009, i was a tutor for a little girl, and i also gave leons in primary schools.In January, 2010, i worked as a volunteer in Chinese People\\'s Political Consultative Committee, Chengdu.In October, 2010, i worked for Western China International Fair, etc.
All in all, i am a diligent girl, and i am a good learner.I am interested in culture exchange, and i like to serve people.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity for a personal interview.
With many thanks
Sincerely,
*****

大学生英文自荐信格式怎么样？

Dear Sir/Madam:
Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the April 10 Student Daily interested me bacause the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.
According to the advertisement ,your position requires top university,Bachelor or above in Computer Science or equivalent field and proficient in Windows NT4.0 and LINUX System. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Graduate School of Tsinghua University this year with a M.S. degree . My studies have included courses in computer control and management and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual InterDev and SQL Server.
【大学生英文自荐信格式怎么样？】During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only have I passed CET-6, but more important I can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to write and speak English is out of question.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.