神鸟改写作文怎么写？( 二 )

Yours truly
Sally
写作思路提示：
第一段：开门见山表达谢意。
第二段：稍加说明感谢原因，并举例说明具体帮助。
第三段：说明帮助所起的作用以及再次感谢。
Test 2
Part IWriting:
Why Do People Keep Pets?
With the increasing improvement of their life, many people are wild about keeping pets.Nowadays, it is very common that we see people taking a walk leisurely with their dear pets along the streets towards evening.At social gatherings people who like keeping pets exchange their experience on taking care of pets.One is not
surprised if a pet costs as high as one’s annual earnings.However, why do people keep pets?
The answer to this problem involves many factors.First, pets make us happy and far from lonely as human companions.Second, pets give us a sense of being important and needed because they depend on us for home, food and drink.Besides, a pet in a family keeps us in touch with the more natural, animal world.
However, it is my belief that some problems can’t be ignored since the growing number of pets may leads to hygiene problems.In many public places pets should be forbidden to enter because they are likely to spread disease and interfere with other people.In short.we should always keep our environment clean at any time.
写作思路提示：
第一段：根据提示简单说明养宠物的现象，提出问题。
第二段：对问题做简单分析。
第三段：简述自己的看法。
Test 3
Part IWriting:
Private Tutoring
A recent investigation shows that private tutoring is “in” and that an increasing number of college students choose to be tutors in their spare time.
Nowadays, on the one hand, many parents are attaching greater importance to education for their children.However, many of them are helple when their children meet with difficulties in study.Private tutoring may be the better solution.On the other hand, those students who work as tutors usually come from poor families or have financial difficulties, they want to make money for themselves and relieve the burden of their parents.In addition, some students expect to be aociated with society by working as tutors.
However, some people think that college students should make good use of their time in study, but not wasting their valuable time as tutors.As for me, it is not a bad thing for college students to be tutored in their spare time as long as they are able to arrange their time well.
写作思路提示：
第一段：根据提示,开门见山提出主题：大学生做家教流行。
第二段：然后简述其原因, 对大学生做家教的利弊做简单分析。
第三段：简述自己的看法。
Test 4
Part IWriting:
Where There is Will，There is Way
This proverb means that if you are really determined to do something, you will overcome any difficulties until you eventually succeed.
If one wants to succeed in doing something, he must obtain great courage to face and overcome any difficulties he encounters on his way to achieve the goal.He should learn to strengthen his will and can’t allow failures to defeat him.Many succeful people home and abroad have achieved amazing achievements just because they have such characters.