改写望月作文写法怎么样？( 二 )

However, some people think that college students should make good use of their time in study, but not wasting their valuable time as tutors.As for me, it is not a bad thing for college students to be tutored in their spare time as long as they are able to arrange their time well.
写作思路提示：
第一段：根据提示,开门见山提出主题：大学生做家教流行。
第二段：然后简述其原因, 对大学生做家教的利弊做简单分析。
第三段：简述自己的看法。
Test 4
Part IWriting:
Where There is Will，There is Way
This proverb means that if you are really determined to do something, you will overcome any difficulties until you eventually succeed.
If one wants to succeed in doing something, he must obtain great courage to face and overcome any difficulties he encounters on his way to achieve the goal.He should learn to strengthen his will and can’t allow failures to defeat him.Many succeful people home and abroad have achieved amazing achievements just because they have such characters.
Let’s take English study for example , many people want to learn English well, but the result is usually opposite to their wish just because those people are lack of strong will to win through obstacles and to keep learning English often.However, those who are really determined to learn English well are never afraid of difficulties in learning English and always persist in learning it.Therefore, they can finally succeed in learning English well and really master a foreign language.
写作思路提示：
1.简单解释作文题的含义。
2.简单阐述为什么“有志者事竟成“的道理。
3.举例说明主题的正确性。
Test 5
Part IWriting:
Job Problems for College Graduates
According to the charts, only 48 percent of graduates in 1994 could find jobs related to their majors, compared with 89 percent in 1981 when china had its first college graduates after the Cultural Revolution.Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get a satisfactory and rewarding job?
One reason perhaps is that many colleges and universities fail to get their curricula to the development of industries.Degree courses offered in many colleges and universities are so out-dated and irrelevant and impractical that employers as well as students themselves find it hard to translate their book knowledge into real job skills.
Secondly, there is an oversupply of graduates with certain specialty, and this oversupply is increasing.The result is that many of them cannot
enter the profeion for which they are trained and have to take other jobs which even do not require a college degree.
On the other hand, the disparity in pay between intellectual work and busine management has frustrated the hope and ambition of the graduates who major in education, administration and liberal arts.
College graduates are, so to speak, valuable resources in our country.The problems they encounter in job hunting deserve more attention form the colleges and the government.The colleges should get students out of the ivory tower and gear their courses to the real needs of industry and busine; while the government should provide college graduates with more vocational opportunities, better working conditions and decent salaries.