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《坐井观天》改写作文怎么写？

森林里有一只骄傲的青蛙。有一天，飞来了一只漂亮的孔雀，青蛙问：“孔雀小姐，你到哪里去呀？” 孔雀回答：“青蛙王子，我从天上来，飞了很远，有点儿渴了，下来找些水喝。”青蛙立即反驳：“那是不可能的，你别说大话了，天不过井口那么大，还用飞那么远吗？” 孔雀却微笑地说：“是你弄错了，天其实无边无际，实在是很大呀。”青蛙得意的说：“我是不会弄错的，反正天只有井口那么大。” 孔雀又道：“这样吧，我帮忙你跳出来，让你看一看人类的世界和天吧。”于是青蛙在孔雀的帮助下从井里跳了出来，并看到了井外美丽的世界。青蛙见到了绿树成阴、鲜花盛开的高山；草原上牛羊成群，像一块绿色的地毯；田野里稻谷笑弯了腰，风一吹，就像稻海翻起金色的波浪；大海象是在奏欢乐的乐曲；城市里还有许多立交桥，桥上开着许多各种各样的车辆，来来往往，川流不息……最后它不好意思的对孔雀说到：“原来天真的这么大，这么美。”

《坐井观天》改写作文怎么写？

Test 1
Part IWriting:
A Letter of Gratitude
Dear Mary,
Many thanks to you for your timely help with my preparations for the CET-4.
Originally I only wanted to ask you for some advice on the coming test, as you were so good at English.But to my surprise, you gave more help to me than I had ever expected.You not only gave me some suggestions but also showed me how I could arrange my time and what I should do in each month before the test.Besides, you lent me the book I needed very much when you learned that I had not yet got it.It was really kind and considerate of you.
Your unreserved help enabled me to make efficient preparations and at last encouraged me to pa the test.I really owe all my succe to you.So I would like to extend my heartfelt gratitude again.
Yours truly
Sally
写作思路提示：
第一段：开门见山表达谢意。
第二段：稍加说明感谢原因，并举例说明具体帮助。
第三段：说明帮助所起的作用以及再次感谢。
Test 2
Part IWriting:
Why Do People Keep Pets?
With the increasing improvement of their life, many people are wild about keeping pets.Nowadays, it is very common that we see people taking a walk leisurely with their dear pets along the streets towards evening.At social gatherings people who like keeping pets exchange their experience on taking care of pets.One is not
surprised if a pet costs as high as one’s annual earnings.However, why do people keep pets?
The answer to this problem involves many factors.First, pets make us happy and far from lonely as human companions.Second, pets give us a sense of being important and needed because they depend on us for home, food and drink.Besides, a pet in a family keeps us in touch with the more natural, animal world.