《坐井观天》改写作文怎么写？( 四 ) 「问人人知识网」

According to the charts, only 48 percent of graduates in 1994 could find jobs related to their majors, compared with 89 percent in 1981 when china had its first college graduates after the Cultural Revolution.Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get a satisfactory and rewarding job?
One reason perhaps is that many colleges and universities fail to get their curricula to the development of industries.Degree courses offered in many colleges and universities are so out-dated and irrelevant and impractical that employers as well as students themselves find it hard to translate their book knowledge into real job skills.
Secondly, there is an oversupply of graduates with certain specialty, and this oversupply is increasing.The result is that many of them cannot
enter the profeion for which they are trained and have to take other jobs which even do not require a college degree.
【《坐井观天》改写作文怎么写？】On the other hand, the disparity in pay between intellectual work and busine management has frustrated the hope and ambition of the graduates who major in education, administration and liberal arts.
College graduates are, so to speak, valuable resources in our country.The problems they encounter in job hunting deserve more attention form the colleges and the government.The colleges should get students out of the ivory tower and gear their courses to the real needs of industry and busine; while the government should provide college graduates with more vocational opportunities, better working conditions and decent salaries.
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《坐井观天》改写作文怎么写？

井底的青蛙听了乌龟对大海的形容，非常羡慕，也想去看看大海，便向乌龟恳求道：“乌龟大哥，求求你也带我去看看大海吧！”乌龟答应了。青蛙以前都听小鸟说天大的无边无际，乌龟也说大海是那么的蓝，我倒要出去看看外面的世界到底是什么。于是青哇费了九牛二虎之力，终于跳出井，眼前一切都让它惊呆了，真像小鸟说的一样，天无边无际，为什么外面的景色和井里看到的不一样呢，于是它们在一个下雨的夜晚，出发了。
他们走了三天三夜，可这对青蛙来说，好比三年，他看见的每一个事物都让青蛙震惊。“哇！天原来这么大！”“呀！原来大地这么辽阔！”……
终于，他们到大海边，乌龟背对大海自豪的说：“怎么样，大海漂亮吧？”小青蛙听了，左看看，右看看，说：“乌龟大哥，这就是你说的美丽的大海吗？怎么这么脏呀！”乌龟听了，回头一看，呆住了，只见蓝色的海水成了黑水，鱼儿的尸体浮在海上，远处一个工厂正排放着黑色污水，大型的游船慢慢的游过，喷出了浓浓的黑烟，海面上到处漂浮着垃圾和泡沫，远处的那片椰子树，现在已经成了正在施工的高楼大厦……